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nauseated

I want pink hair now.....
Mixed Thoughts and Feelings

Summary:
Tziporah Tzana Ruusuu, or Bunneh as she liked to be called, had just transferred into Hogwarts from Mein Magic in Germany. She meets new friends, and falls in love with one of the Marauders...(Past Hogwarts Fic)

Princess Victoria: To explain this fic, one has to look at the author's penname "Bunny Luna". Hey! That sounds like "Bunneh Luna" ooooooooo *barf*

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Chapter 1: On Sight

The pink haired girl with blue eyes walked into the new school. Hogwarts, it was called, School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. She transferred from another witchcraft school in her old hometown of Munich, Germany, and it was called “Mein Magic.” She walked into the Headmaster’s office and sat in the chair in front of him. It was time to register in.

Princess Victoria: Pink hair? Blue eyes? Exchange student? I smell A Sue!

Princess Victoria: "Mein Magic"? Doesn't that translate to My Magic? Riiiiight. And if she was persecuted for being a witch, why did she go to a school of magic in Germany?

“…Tziporah Tzana Ruusuu,” She sighed, “But can you just register me as Bunneh Luna?”

Princess Joy: That's a mouth full...and where did the nickname come from? Ohhh the pen name!

Princess Joy: How does she know about the Houses if she's a transfer student? Not every other wizarding school has Houses.

The hat went over ocean colour eyes and covered them from view—she saw darkness.

Princess Victoria: Ocean coloured? Like Carribbean? Or Stormy artic?

Princess Joy: She really likes to talk about the pink hair.

The person glanced at the burn marked scar shaped like a large spider on her back,

Princess Joy: Hmmm, a scar? Where did we hear that before?

On the four-poster below the bed she was going to be on was another girl. She had blue hair, and wore purple star PJ pants with a meshy black top and a tube top underneath that. She snored loudly; seems as if she slept in.

Princess Victoria: Firstly, no one sleeps in at Hogwarts. Secondly, this is a Mauraders Fic, so why is everyone dressed like it's 2004. And Shinii? Wha? Why is she speaking like an American? And why does she automatically assume that Bunneh Luna is her nickname?

As I thought, Bunneh thought, “Well, um, I guess I should start putting my stuff away…”
“I can help!”
“Really?” Bunneh smiled, “That’d be nice. I have a lot of stuff,”

Princess Victoria: You have a lot of stuff, yet you had to flee for life, yet you grabbed your stuff.

It’s been only a couple of hours, but they seemed to be good friends, if not, best friends.

Princess Victoria: Well, yeah, espically if you didn't meet anyone else except someone who called you "Icky".

Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu and Self-Insertions: 22


Chapter 2: Potions Class

But of course, she could not get his etched picture out of her mind. She kept thinking about it even in her sleep. Her dreams were filled with Remus Lupin, as sappy as it sounds. Were Slytherins terrible people? Were the Gryffindors different from them? How different Hogwarts was!

Princess Joy: Um, Didn't you just see Remus? How could you be dreaming of him?

You know you have no chance with him,” The girl said. She had blonde hair and green eyes, with a very strong German accent.

Princess Joy: Well, if it IS a flash back, wouldn't the person be speaking IN GERMAN, and not a "German accent"?

Potions was in the dungeons. It was dreadfully cold down there, so Bunneh wore a thin sweater (black sweater, fake feather lining).

Princess Victoria: There are no feathers in Hogwarts robes, not in 2004, let alone in 1974.

There were first five, now six—the new entry had blue hair and emerald green eyes, and seemed to have a fancy for the tallest one in the group: a black haired pale boy.

Princess Victoria: Another OC with crazy hair and funny eyes? Excellent! A Gryffindor!Sue, who likes Sirius! So now everyone can be paired off because I am sure Peter won't end up with anyone...most fan girls either don't write him, or make him evil from the beginning.

Princess Victoria: Remmy? That's just a personal beef I have. His name is Remus. When has he EVER been called Remmy?

Princess Victoria: She hates Snape too? Even though she's a Slytherin? hmmm.

Princess Joy: The Gryffindor's name is "Star", gag me.

Star, the blue haired girl, punched Sirius on the arm, “We’ll all go apologize. It’s all our faults for letting him do this in the first place,”

“Fine,” They all said in unison, and before the class was even over they packed up and left during all the pandemonium.

Princess Victoria: Aw, she can resolve the conflicts, how sueish.

Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu and Self-Insertions: 24


Chapter 3: Apology at the Hospital Wing

Sirius was about to jump on James, but Star stopped him. She calmed them both down and looked at Bunneh. Bunneh paid no attention whatsoever, so Star just sighed. She knew that this was going to be harder than they thought, so she looked over at all of them, and Sirius silently and secretly brought out his wand.

Princess Joy: Again with solving the conflict; does she have any other purpose?

Princess Victoria: Sirius, the best way to get people to listen to you is not by flipping them upside down.

Princess Joy: I find it convient that she didn't want to listen to Sirius at all until Remus asked her to listen. That's so annoying.

Remus interrupted, “Be careful, Paws, the blood could rush to her head if she stays that way too long,”

Princess Joy: Who's Paws? I don't know a Paws. It's Padfoot, not Paws. And they are not Animangi yet, so I don't even know if they would have their nicknames.

Princess Victoria: Where's Peter? Oh yeah! FanGirl!Author did not include him, although, you know, he was a Maurader too.

“Remus,” Bunneh said, “I don’t need this. From the first day, which was yesterday, I knew things would have gone horribly wrong. It did in Mein Magic, it will here too. I cannot escape my bad luck, I was born with a curse, and I’ll die with a curse,”

“I don’t unders—” Remus began.

Princess Joy: What don't you understand? She was born with a curse, it'll kill her.

Princess Victoria: Oooo she can play an instrument, that's colour cordinated.

Princess Victoria: I do think Severus giving her the card was cute.

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